| An Acoustic song by me | ||
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trivium-bikkie |
September 16, 2009 1:56:55 AM UTC | Post #1 |
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Just a sweet melody I wrote it's pretty short but I like it, it's played with the electric just for recording purposes it sounds better with the acoustic tho.. |
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Elliot |
February 02, 2007 9:07:40 PM UTC | Post #1 |
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Thats pretty sweet, even though it's not meant for electric i like your tone. I think it gets better towards the end, and the ending could use a little work to make it less sudden, but its still pretty cool, well done. |
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trivium-bikkie |
February 03, 2007 10:15:50 AM UTC | Post #2 |
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The ending is sudden because it's not done yet, i need to keep developing it, thanks for the kind words |
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trivium3_rich |
February 03, 2007 2:13:26 PM UTC | Post #3 |
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The start seem abit sloppy (still pisses over my playing) |
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carcass255 |
February 07, 2007 10:37:25 AM UTC | Post #4 |
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nice song, keep improving it |
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d00msday |
February 07, 2007 3:02:37 PM UTC | Post #5 |
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cool. |
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northern_wrath |
February 08, 2007 6:30:39 PM UTC | Post #6 |
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The begining was kinda sloppy, yeah. But I dug that alot man. Really cool, bro. Great ear for melody. Had kind of a soft-jazz/pop styling. I enjoyed it! |
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the lentzinator |
February 08, 2007 8:49:01 PM UTC | Post #7 |
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Nice, that was a fun listen. |
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