Critique my band?
September 16, 2009 1:56:15 AM UTC Post #1

Hi everyone I was wondering if you guys could give a listen to a song my band wrote and give me your thoughts about what you liked and didn't like.
Its on our myspace but we only recorded it with 2 mics placed in the room, we're gonna try to get a better recording when we get some money.
We try to blend different types of metal in our songs but this song came out more death-metalish so some of you might not like it, I think the second half after the clean part is awesome tho.
www.myspace.com/fallenmartyr
I know the vocals aren't that great, he is new and he is still trying to get his parts down
Thanks
-Walter


April 08, 2007 10:23:31 AM UTC Post #1

I'm wanting to check this out... but your myspace is not working right now. That or my internet conection is being eaten up. I'll try again later, as to what was said above, about the eBay comment from metal disease, rofl. I understand sarcasm/jokes in good jest, but, hahaha. Talk about arrogant, jealous, conceited, little bitch. That was actually the stupidest thing I've ever read.

April 08, 2007 10:06:27 AM UTC Post #2

Not bad at all actually, I dig it except for the vocals. Are you guys in D.C.? I'm from NOVA, and wouldn't mind coming out to some shows or whatever. Yay for good NOVA bands, they don't come by often lol.

April 08, 2007 7:23:47 AM UTC Post #3

Just by their "top friends" I'd say Testament is one

April 08, 2007 6:51:27 AM UTC Post #4

I'm really liking it, pretty good riffage, and some decent vocals for the time being, with time they could get better.
Influences?

April 08, 2007 5:23:52 AM UTC Post #5

So I didn't want to start a new thread so I found this old one.

First I decided not to take your advice and kept my equipment and kept on practicing.
Second we are being monitored by a couple of labels right now. (So at least we caught attention from someone who wants to listen to our "Terrible, Horrific band"
And third listen to our new song on Myspace!
**Warning if you don't like guitar solos, harmonies, and fast drums then don't listen**
http://www.myspace.com/FallenMartyr
This is the song that will be on the NOVA promo compilations cd that will be distributed thru out the US. The version on the myspace is the unmastered copy.
Thanks much and have a good day
-Walt

April 11, 2007 9:29:40 PM UTC Post #6

QUOTE(Walterallica @ Apr 9 2007, 01:45 AM) [snapback]369662[/snapback]Influences vary thruout each member in the band. Ranging from The Beatles to Bach and up to Testament and other metal bands.
Yea we have a couple of shows lined up for now, around the area. We are playing the Nova promos festival on the 15th and we are also opening for Vital Remains and With Blood comes cleansing. So if you want to hit up any of the shows go ahead!
If you do go you should come up to me after the show and say hi or something haha
Yea the "core" scene is getting kind of tiring around these parts
Yea the place we recorded deffinately did not do a goodjob. The song on the myspace is supposed to be the final mix but we are getting annoyed cuz the guy who mixed it is not answering his calls or email when we are trying to tell him we need to mix it again.
Anyway the singer is new and right before he did vocals he had greasy pizza at Jerry's >_<
But he really is a terrific singer, hes attended MI in Hollywood for the past 2 years and hes developed his voice most of his life. Can't wait till you guys hear the other stuff, his singing is soooo good.
Oh and thanks guys for the compliments and advice.
Who else here plays guitar?
I may hit them up some time, but KC's is a bitch to get to. Go to Jaxx and I'll defininitely be there, even though it is quite the shithole. And guitarist right here.

August 15, 2006 5:41:51 PM UTC Post #7

This can either go in the myspace link post or in bands.

August 15, 2006 5:46:23 PM UTC Post #8

not bad i guess..im not really into that deep of death metal :evil:

August 15, 2006 5:46:34 PM UTC Post #9

That's not too shabby actually.
Good job 8)

August 17, 2006 10:19:51 PM UTC Post #10

ok. heres what i want you to do so listen carefully.
Take your guitar, drums, amps, and all other equpment.
take pictures of all of it.
Put the pictures on your computer.
make an eBay account.
Sell it all at once, sell it on eBay (because no one wants to hear any of you play) and save the world from your terrible, horrific band.
Sike, im kidding. but seriously i dont like it

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