Haha, laugh at my title... I couldn't think of anything for a song title. Well this is a song ToneGod101 and I wrote in our band "Pinnacle". It's not finished, the tone sucks, the mixing is pretty bad, and the solo is horrific... so here is the unfinished crappy song.
http://media.putfile.com/Pent-Up-Rage-Pinnacle

QUOTE(MurderThyLamb)Haha, laugh at my title... I couldn't think of anything for a song title. Well this is a song ToneGod101 and I wrote in our band "Pinnacle". It's not finished, the tone sucks, the mixing is pretty bad, and the solo is horrific... so here is the unfinished crappy song.
http://media.putfile.com/Pent-Up-Rage-Pinnacle
Why do you post a song YOU think is crappy?
anyways: too much reverb in all parts.. the solo is just emotion-less screwing around.. other than that, it's aight

Yea I couldn't think of a solo to play.... I'll redo the solo part later and probably redo a bit more as well. I posted a song I think is crappy for other's to bash it as well. It's inspirational. There's only reverb on the two lead parts.. other than that, no reverb.

Hey, defientely needs some souping up dude...maybe I could come over sometime and we could record it together . Orrrrr...just fix it.

It'd sound fuller with a backing track. The only real bad thing about it is, the riffs, when played with the two guitar parts soudn sloppy as all fuck cake You jsut got to work on getting the two rythm tracks as tight as possible. I didn't really jive on the solos, but they're a start. Also everything seems to be peaking. Volume wise. I like the main riff however.

QUOTE(Northern_Wrath)It'd sound fuller with a backing track. The only real bad thing about it is, the riffs, when played with the two guitar parts soudn sloppy as all fuck cake You jsut got to work on getting the two rythm tracks as tight as possible. I didn't really jive on the solos, but they're a start. Also everything seems to be peaking. Volume wise. I like the main riff however.
Yea man, I didn't take time to do it all. I did it all in one take, in one hour haha... ToneGod's coming over this weekend and going to re-record it all on his XXX. As for the solo... You can guarantee it will be more structured and better overall. I'll take note about the volume... and thanks for the comment about the main riff.

I liked it, it was pretty good, reminded me a lot of Sanctity
It's better than I can write.
BURNING RETRIBUTION!!!

Pretty cool man

QUOTE(MurderThyLamb)QUOTE(Northern_Wrath)It'd sound fuller with a backing track. The only real bad thing about it is, the riffs, when played with the two guitar parts soudn sloppy as all fuck cake You jsut got to work on getting the two rythm tracks as tight as possible. I didn't really jive on the solos, but they're a start. Also everything seems to be peaking. Volume wise. I like the main riff however.
Yea man, I didn't take time to do it all. I did it all in one take, in one hour haha... ToneGod's coming over this weekend and going to re-record it all on his XXX. As for the solo... You can guarantee it will be more structured and better overall. I'll take note about the volume... and thanks for the comment about the main riff.
Yeah man, its great to hear stuff.
Its just sometihngs peaking, so I thought i'd point that out. Can't wait to hear it on the XXX, i thnk Loomis used XXX heads on one of Nevermore albums.

QUOTE(Carnage)damn, your picking technique sucks  :)
Nice to know.